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Dream House

I have built a house on the hill of dream We both have craved about it overstating the travail it was taking us to get things done, but in reality I was more impressed by the swift and gentle tempo of our hearts We unpacked boxes of chocolate memories The welcoming blinds grappled with sea wind breezing in Last night, we greeted the quiet hill with our breath panting from such usual rite into the contentedness of desire And the stars photographed our blushful thoughts, engraving them into the house that we both wished

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 12/1/2008 10:58:00 PM
deep poem filled with hope and love for the home or what ever you are telling us in this great poem. thank you for sharing.
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Date: 11/22/2008 5:47:00 PM
Ernie this is nice and what a veiw.Michael Torres
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Date: 11/22/2008 1:58:00 PM
Hi Ernesto. Great poem. Thanks for the comment on my blog and good luck in the contest. Best wishes, Nigel
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