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Dream Dismantled

Dream dismantled  I fell in love with an Petite, fawn brown angel Somehow I Didn't know it In return she yearned compassion, understanding patents and dedication   But I was unable to show it Despite my jaded ideologies my unwillingness To believe My angel never selfish Always sharing her halo with me   Obtuse and naive   Within a certain degree Unaware and mislead My mental baggage  Made it impossible to conceive. My pursuit of happiness  Was finally achieved Truly a blessing in disguise  in the form of a friend Reduced to a Dream dismantled   Never to be seen or heard from again.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 10/24/2011 8:50:00 AM
w.o.w. that was really good. o.o
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Date: 10/24/2011 5:13:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you today Hernan. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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