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I often have the same dream Of castles in the air With a knight in shining armour To give me love and tender care He’d help me fight my battles To ease my troubled life We’d live in perfect harmony Maybe I’d become his wife I wonder do our dreams come true Where are you my love... I’m so missing you Jan Allison 20th November 2014

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Date: 12/18/2014 8:22:00 AM
Jan, awe so sweet. He will come for you! You must be patient and you will be truly blessed. Meg
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Date: 12/18/2014 9:15:00 AM
No harm in dreaming:-) Hugs jan xxx
Date: 11/21/2014 12:04:00 PM
Just read this again. What was I thinking this is a triple fav.
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Date: 11/21/2014 12:07:00 PM
aww you are too kind my friend:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 11/21/2014 6:48:00 AM
soft really very beautifully painted jan excellent pen bless you
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Date: 11/21/2014 6:58:00 AM
Thanks as ever Liam:-) Hugs jan xx
Date: 11/20/2014 8:42:00 AM
Flows like a dream! And, yes, many are the dreams that come true...but some are beyond reality! hugs // paul
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Date: 11/20/2014 11:58:00 AM
Thanks Paul guess there is no harm in dreaming though... :-) Hugs jan xxx
Date: 11/20/2014 7:46:00 AM
Very nice romantic dreams, thoughts my dear friend Jan. Very lovely write! Enjoyed so much my visit with you! :) Love and hugs! xxx D.
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Date: 11/20/2014 11:57:00 AM
Thanks so much Dorian:-) Hugs janx
Date: 11/20/2014 6:35:00 AM
An inspired write. Loved it!
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Date: 11/20/2014 11:57:00 AM
Thanks Maurice I wrote it when I was visiting dad yesterday:-) Hugs jan xx
Date: 11/20/2014 6:33:00 AM
tender romantic poem Jan an exquisite pen hugs 7
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Date: 11/20/2014 11:56:00 AM
Thanks so much Shadow:-) Hugs jan xx
Date: 11/20/2014 4:53:00 AM
Sweet. nice meter and flow
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Date: 11/20/2014 4:55:00 AM
thanks so much Joel :-) hugs Jan xx

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