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By woods, really deep...
for sprite--wood sprite, I peep!
willows, thorns… hands scratched,
pixie with willow, I yearned!
all through, jars, cans, big, small,
fairy to see, every lid:I pull to fall,
tears down, I hit something aaaah! an elf,
signs to follow, fear engulfs,
deep I walk, wow !my Audi version glide,
jumped on to the seat, elf-- by side
wow! lightning pace, clouds! I kiss clouds!
hugged elf, “love you”screamed I aloud,
“you crazy goose!” screamed my mom,
Jesus! was it a dream?

(Dream as said by my son)

23-06-2013////// for the contest "fantasy"

edited on 20-08-2013.
Submitted for the contest "Any poem,Any subject" by "Anne Currin"


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  1. Date: 11/2/2013 11:39:00 PM
    Jenish, .:-) Congratulations on having your poem featured on the HOME PAGE.... always~ LINDA

  1. Date: 8/13/2013 2:43:00 PM
    just stopping by here to thank you for seeing my poems recently. Did I ever ask you where you are from?

  1. Date: 7/5/2013 7:51:00 PM
    Wonderful dream, friend, and it is a cute write, thnx for your visit!!

  1. Date: 6/27/2013 7:03:00 PM
    It's a pleasure to have read this delightful poem. Nicely done. Best wishes in the contest. Warm Smiles Connie.

  1. Date: 6/26/2013 10:06:00 PM
    Hello Jenish, kids can dream all sorts of dreams... sometimes i wonder what fantasy land they live it... love the ending jumping feeling and thought... :-).... xox~ LINDA

  1. Date: 6/26/2013 9:32:00 AM
    What an amazing dream. Thank you for reading and commenting on mine. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 6/26/2013 8:20:00 AM
    I like your entry a lot, very well done thanks for sharing your sons dream.

  1. Date: 6/24/2013 11:53:00 PM
    so did your son say this to you? I like the insertion of the little elf into the scene and it did have a dream quality to it for sure!!