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By woods, really deep... for sprite--wood sprite, I peep! willows, thorns… hands scratched, pixie with willow, I yearned! all through, jars, cans, big, small, fairy to see, every lid:I pull to fall, tears down, I hit something aaaah! an elf, signs to follow, fear engulfs, deep I walk, wow !my Audi version glide, jumped on to the seat, elf-- by side wow! lightning pace, clouds! I kiss clouds! hugged elf, “love you”screamed I aloud, “you crazy goose!” screamed my mom, Jesus! was it a dream? (Dream as said by my son) 23-06-2013////// for the contest "fantasy" edited on 20-08-2013. Submitted for the contest "Any poem,Any subject" by "Anne Currin"

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Date: 11/2/2013 11:39:00 PM
Jenish, .:-) Congratulations on having your poem featured on the HOME PAGE.... always~ LINDA
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Date: 8/13/2013 2:43:00 PM
just stopping by here to thank you for seeing my poems recently. Did I ever ask you where you are from?
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Date: 7/5/2013 7:51:00 PM
Wonderful dream, friend, and it is a cute write, thnx for your visit!!
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Date: 6/27/2013 7:03:00 PM
It's a pleasure to have read this delightful poem. Nicely done. Best wishes in the contest. Warm Smiles Connie.
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Date: 6/26/2013 10:06:00 PM
Hello Jenish, kids can dream all sorts of dreams... sometimes i wonder what fantasy land they live it... love the ending jumping feeling and thought... :-).... xox~ LINDA
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Date: 6/26/2013 9:32:00 AM
What an amazing dream. Thank you for reading and commenting on mine. Love, Joyce
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Date: 6/26/2013 8:20:00 AM
I like your entry a lot, very well done thanks for sharing your sons dream.
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Date: 6/24/2013 11:53:00 PM
so did your son say this to you? I like the insertion of the little elf into the scene and it did have a dream quality to it for sure!!
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