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one fine morning i woke up with a smile
because in my dream i walked with you a mile

i held your hand tight
because  i dint want u go to out of my sight

on the leaves there was morning dew
and the birds chirping were very few

sunrays fell over your face
never had i seen so beautiful place

everything that i felt was very new
suddenly i woke up and all the butterflies flew :)

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  1. Date: 1/8/2012 6:23:00 AM
    Interesting poem. I am a little thrown off with the spelling (coz) instead of because and (u) instead of you. Other than that you have a nice poem here. Jancarl

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    Date: 1/8/2012 6:40:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    :) i'v change coz to because & u to you
  1. Date: 1/8/2012 6:08:00 AM
    I smile to, it. oxox love from Anne-Lise :)