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Down-To-Earth Heaven

Ha, everyone wants to go to Heaven, But you, me, no one wants to die for it, You can't bet your life if it's there even, It's a hearsay, you just read about it; You live your life once then forever quit. If you are so driven, level with me, What would you trust and what do you decree-- Torah, Bible, Koran, Ramayana? They are all true as I happen to see; Heaven's here on earth, So is Nirvana! ~'Dezain Me' contest by Dr. Ram Mehta

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Date: 2/15/2015 10:35:00 AM
Abdul ~ Congratulations on the win. It's an honor to read every poem In Dr Ram's DAZAIN ME contest. *Skat LOVE*
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Date: 2/6/2015 10:37:00 PM
Very good one for the what you are trying to portray. Congrats for your win.
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Date: 2/4/2015 11:52:00 PM
COngratulations Abdul.. :)! Love the thought,.. :)!!!..olive eloisa.. :)!
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Date: 2/3/2015 2:26:00 PM
Abdul, congratulations on your 1st Place win. Very interesting philosophy your present! Sandra
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Date: 2/3/2015 1:51:00 PM
How wonderful for you! Congrats on your insightful and rather amusing win..
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Date: 2/3/2015 8:17:00 AM
very true, congrats for top win.
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Date: 2/3/2015 7:29:00 AM
So is Nirvana.... a beautiful poem... congrats on your win Abdul
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Date: 2/3/2015 7:15:00 AM
Congrats Abdul on win)))rajat
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Date: 2/3/2015 6:30:00 AM
Many congrats on your win Abdul:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 2/3/2015 5:13:00 AM
Thanks for participating in my contest and congrats on the win, Abdul
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