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Down At the Park

Down at the park no biking no spitting no littering no loitering no children no running no walking no skipping no singing no sweating no flipping no picnicking no body Kathy Collins October 21, 2013 P.S. I used to live in a town where you were allowed to jog as long as you didn’t sweat. Anything perspiration-related in public was forbidden.

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Date: 11/24/2013 9:30:00 AM
Sounds like no (park)ing, too. I love the line, 'no body'...great ending.
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Date: 10/29/2013 3:16:00 PM
There are lots of strange laws... kinda makes you wonder what strange creatures dwell in wo/men's minds... Love, Terry
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Date: 10/21/2013 3:41:00 PM
and that was without even jogging, but just sitting in the Iowa humidity.
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Date: 10/21/2013 3:40:00 PM
OMG, are you kidding me?? I would have been expelled from your town then. I sweated so bad as a kid, it went all the way under my arm halfway to my waist!!
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