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Down, Down, Down

Hold on tight, the rides getting rough with every yesterday seems things are worse down, down, down she falls from Grace while everyone watches this greedy race Once so strong designed by men of truth she gave us freedom and justice, this we knew now everyday, changes are made to enable some taking and giving, what have they done change must come, very soon or they will have nothing, just doom strength will change a weak man's mind but strength now, is hard to find down, down, down, what can we do to save this country of the Red, White, and Blue their eyes wide shut, full throttle they go destination disaster, this we know

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Date: 4/6/2014 9:00:00 PM
awesome like this... I will love reading more. Smiles and hugs.... Gina
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Date: 3/5/2014 11:45:00 PM
Christy, you and I both know our country has made major, no drastic changes and she is being lead by leaders that are egotistical and not dedicated to what they swore an oath to do. all we can do is keep our prayers that God will send someone to lead us out of the mess we are in, friends always, Ron
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Date: 3/3/2014 2:43:00 PM
We all have to hang in there today. Good write.
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