Doors

Distilled amongst the evening sun Everything will keep on keeping After all is said and done The love not lived forever sleeping Here inside a locked room In the corner of our souls We will meet again and everything collides...

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Jun-Jun Villanueva

Date: 7/5/2011 1:39:00 AM

wow! heartfelt write full of emotions! great job! WELCOME , by the way....enjoy the group and influence others through your comments ,..and you may also write more and read more to inspire... ^_^jun-jun

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/4/2011 8:31:00 AM

A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Nate. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/3/2011 2:35:00 PM

Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoy the site with its many features as I have enjoyed your creative poetry tonight..check out our free contests as u share words with luv..

Glenn Sentes

Date: 7/3/2011 5:39:00 AM

good read, pal=)