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Don'T Tell Me No Lies

Don't tell me you love me, when you've done something wrong. Don't tell me you love me, when you have broken my heart. Don't tll me no stories, don't tell me no lies. Don't tell me you'll change, that things will be right - for when something is broken - you can't make it right. Don't try the sweet talk. It's not going to work. I've been through that road, so many a time before. The sweet talk is nothing, but a way to tell lies, with a touch of sweetness, but they are still lies. I'm begging you - don't even try... 10/25/2012 Written by Lucilla M. Carrillo

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 12/4/2012 2:42:00 PM

Very powerful and relevent poem. Well done.

Joy Wellington

Date: 10/30/2012 10:50:00 PM

Love this one Lucilla!! Sounds like something up my alley. Tell him again girl friend. I so hate liars. One love, Joy Wells

Harry Horsman

Date: 10/30/2012 6:15:00 AM

i read about the lies, here Lucilla, but it is the second line on the 3rd stanza, that gets to me, that anyone should have to walk down that road. love this profound and sincere poem of yours.....

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/28/2012 10:05:00 AM

Dear Lucy, I'm hearing you and feeling you out loud... I wish from the beginning of time. Lying was never invented... but..you know some times people think we want or need to be lied to... I truly do not know what hurts more the lie or the truth.... cover your ears... wink...love your poem... I know you had enough...lovepd

Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 10/28/2012 11:44:00 AM

PD. I think that the truth is always better, no matter how much it hurts. At least you know where you stand. many blessings to you on this beautiful day. Lucilla

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 10/27/2012 5:01:00 PM

Now I'm sending you smiles and good wishes. Re. My last write. It's all from a past and a different place. All is good Hun. Hugs michael

Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 10/28/2012 11:41:00 AM

I'm glad that it's all bwehind you. Many blessings. Lucilla

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/26/2012 11:45:00 AM

GOOD one on telling lies, Lucilla. That sweet talk will get them nowhere with you!! yes, it has snowed already in Utah. that's what inspired my roses poem. t hanks for your comment on it!

Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 10/28/2012 11:39:00 AM

Thanks for reading. Lying is never good. I wish I was there to see the snow. Lucilla

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/26/2012 10:08:00 AM

LIES HAVE SUCH SHORT LEGS LUCILLA AND YOUR WORDS STING THE HEART LUV .. I DETEST LIES AND LIARS TOO .. SOME R FAMOUS FOR BAITING WITH TALL TALES .. VERY EMOTIONAL PIECE ..

Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 10/26/2012 10:24:00 AM

Thank you. I don't like people that lie, because the can never be trusted. But you know what they say - The lie lives until the truth gets there. Have a great weekend. Lucilla

Ceasia White

Date: 10/26/2012 8:24:00 AM

Love the poem. Check out my poem, The Gracious Woman.

Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 10/26/2012 10:22:00 AM

Thank you . I will. lucilla

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/26/2012 7:03:00 AM

What a beautiful day to sit and read the many diverse poems here at the Soup. I am so happy yours were among the ones I am able to read today Lucilla. I hope your weekend is exciting and so full of life and that you might find even more inspiration to write. Love, Carol XXXX

Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 10/26/2012 10:19:00 AM

Thank you so much Carol. Lucilla

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/26/2012 2:54:00 AM

Love can not be built on lies. - A very good poem Lucilla. - Wishing you a lovely weekend. :) oxox - lots of good thoughts to you from / / Anne-Lise :)

Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 10/26/2012 10:21:00 AM

You are right. Love can not be built on lies. Have a great weekend. Lucilla

Larisa Rzhepishevska

Date: 10/25/2012 11:23:00 PM

Very nice poem! Love it so much.

Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 10/26/2012 10:17:00 AM

Thank you very much. Some people can lie about anything. Lucilla

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 10/25/2012 6:16:00 PM

Wow all the writes tonight are about love it's really amazing! Light & Love

Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 10/25/2012 10:32:00 PM

Thanks Debbie. Sometimes it's a love that goes wrong. lucilla