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Don'T Look Back Track

You played your pipe for me to dance, as puppet master, worked the strings, but today my heart will pirouette; I am giving back the gold nose ring. Last night I saw just how it is Between yourself and naive me; you are the wolf, I am the lamb always destroyed in repartee. You think I cannot live alone without your condescending reign; you won't hear Arrivederci play, I won't come back to Rome again. This love train has left the station; It is speeding down "don't look back track." Goodbye to disappointing love; I'm moving on to be exact. Copyright, September 6, 2014 Faye Lanham Gibson

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Date: 9/13/2014 10:22:00 AM
Congratulations on winning with this outstanding poem Faye.
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Date: 9/13/2014 8:08:00 AM
I like the triumphant tone of this piece, congratulations. It sounds like you found the right track!
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Date: 9/13/2014 7:55:00 AM
Oh, I really love this slamming piece! Excellent write, Faye! Congratulations on your great win! Pandita
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Date: 9/12/2014 11:58:00 PM
Wow a very positive n inspiring write on moving on n living life wid a bang n a zeal! Oh I love it Faye! What a great pen! Congrats on ur win!
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Date: 9/8/2014 7:35:00 PM
Very clever poem on moving on.
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Date: 9/7/2014 1:54:00 PM
It is a wise soul who knows when to move on. Nice write. Congratulations on your decision and your expression of it. Cona
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Date: 9/7/2014 12:37:00 PM
Wow, someone's been put in their place, whilst one moves on. Nice one, James :)
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