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Dodging Hate's Siren-Shriek

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Having first published a version of this in November 2012, I was naïve enough to think that republishing such an idea would not be necessary.  But with the influx of ISIS into the middle east conflict, hatred as a given seems to be building into an endless focus. This deep rooted angst as fodder for war is ancient, once again reminds us that it eternally remands rationality even further into the background.  As civilians, we can hope.  But what about those 3000 plus boots on the ground as of this week?  Vietnam syndrome?  Please stay away…please!  (Image by Stephanie Barbe)

Dodging Hate’s Siren-Shriek by Odin Roark He had survived Six months believed to have made him a man. Today, He only wanted his mother. Today, Time was running slow, Slower, Stopping, Begging. Such hopeful beginnings, Such bestial endings, Caked fingers bear blood, Water too precious to remove. As desert sand’s insistence Makes mockery of fear’s dry heaves. Skittering boot prints Like zigzagging sand pipers, Short of food, Wary of enemies, Making patterns so plain, This prophetic hide and seek death dance. Today… Seems right—today. Months of sand storms and fire, Left but sun baked flotsam, Mixed decomposing bodies of friend and foe, Their survival charges piled high, Making but for stumbling of boots Across rotted bodies and limbs, Even flies and rats now ignore. With fingers blood-welded to weapon, He lay down among the carnage, Eager to know the peace, The quiet, The involuntary resolve, Just for a moment, Or two, Just until the siren-shriek Of an incoming missile's presence... Just until it finds him and stops. Not much to ask. Not much If anyone… Anything… Is listening.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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