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Do you love me

Picking these petals off these flowers.
Listening to the thunder and rain showers.
Feeling my heart recieving another crack,
Not knowing if you ever coming back.

Do you love me?
Do you not?

Hoping for these petals to give me a reply.
But they say nothing and the flower dies.
My hearts a game and I'm losing quick.
I think of you plays and I'm feeling sick.

Do you love me?
Do you not?

These questions are haunting and I'm not sure.
With the water in my eyes my vision is blurred.
I guess I'll never know as I lay in my bed.
I hold onto my hearts pieces, my answer left unsaid.

Copyright © karly hasselbach

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  1. Date: 5/30/2013 4:28:00 PM
    Sometimes it's better to let go then to forever wonder, when real love comes there will be no questioning it. Touching write! Sweet win! Hugs

  1. Date: 5/29/2013 1:57:00 PM
    Congrats on your win. AO

  1. Date: 5/28/2013 8:57:00 PM
    Karly. Congratulations, with your awesome poem. Goodnight~LINDA

  1. Date: 5/14/2012 12:28:00 PM

  1. Date: 5/5/2012 9:27:00 PM
    this is precious. Glad I saw it reading Brian's winner list tonight. Big congrats to you.

  1. Date: 5/4/2012 11:13:00 AM
    A beautiful poem here karly.Congrats on your win.

  1. Date: 5/4/2012 7:05:00 AM
    Congratulations on your placement in "Contest 174" Karly. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 4/10/2012 12:23:00 PM
    :) you write some good poems carly