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Do you care???

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Do you care???

Do you like destroying our family?
Do you enjoy tearing us to shreds?
Or are you too prideful to care
Too ignorant to change your ways

I know full well that you don't regret it
I know that you don't mind hurting us
Satan has a tight grip on your heart
And you don't even think twice about it

How I want to speak out to you
But alas I am too young
Believe me, you wouldn't listen to me
But I'm wise enough to know what is wrong

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  1. Date: 7/10/2009 4:30:00 PM
    Jessica, Haven't seen your stuff lately. I found this one by accident. Glad I did. You're right. All too often adults don't listen to their kids. Jesus said "a child shall lead them", and as my Grandmother always was saying"out of the mouths of babes". Well written and expressive. Wish I could make it better. God Bless, Will

  1. Date: 6/21/2009 9:06:00 PM
    Dark imagery in this one. All too common a situation. You put it well! Yours Matthew Anish 1

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    Date: 3/24/2012 11:01:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I completely agree. I would post an actual comment, but it would just be different wording of this... - Kyli Knupp
  1. Date: 6/18/2009 10:05:00 AM
    Sounds like my own childhood, Jessica, thanks for sharing, love Too, to you!

  1. Date: 6/17/2009 8:34:00 PM
    Very deep and very powerful. Keep your head up. and Keep up the good writing. Lots of Love, Misty

  1. Date: 6/17/2009 8:16:00 PM
    Hi Jessica, Your poem is well written. Your point comes across clearly. I hope that you continue to look at the good within yourself even when things around aren't perfect. Keep writing. Lovingly, Dane Soup Mail.