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Do Not Visit My Grave and Cry

< >when my body retires and my strength is no more when you can not talk to me like we used to this when i die do not visit my grave and cry come and celebrate my life sing melodious songs wear your best outfits and share them jokes wear them heels ladies just do not visit my grave and cry i live a happy life that i love so dearly through thick and thin i dare not to drop a tear my faith overcomes my fear i smile more than i sigh celebrate my life dear friends do not visit my grave and cry remember me for my voice my love and kindness remember me for my love of wine my fun personality and my craziness this is how i must be remembered just dont come to my grave and cry your cries will scare my angels your mourning will never bring me back your witch hunt will cost you money shoot me some pool please do not visit my grave and cry

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Date: 4/15/2012 12:15:00 PM
This is very good. I feel the same way. You are right - they should not cry for us because we will be in a better place. I posted a poem something like this. On your first stanza, the third line maybe should not be there. The rest is good. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla
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