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Do Not Grieve Your Muse

(For My Younger Self) You have forgotten your muse. You neglected her, in the hustle and bustle of city life, in trying to carve a niche, driving yourself too hard - thinking it could make you rich. She grieves. Don’t you see her? She grieves. How she longs to reunite with you but you are far too busy, with everything new. Too unmindful, too steeped in the practical your change was so radical; Too pragmatic, everything has become automatic. You have lost touch with your muse, no matter how she pleads you have become obtuse. When will you reach into the softer, more introspective part of yourself? Please do not say, never. Remember how you would write through the night and people around you would wonder why… Those moments were priceless, the times you communed with words so ageless as you poured onto paper all your emotions - In the night, you would write of happiness and pain, of a young love, and of your simple dreams. Go back to those simple dreams. Do not allow yourself to be lost in the conundrum that is Life. Step back, take stock, be still. Find time for meditation, there is no condemnation for those who acknowledge the need for salvation. And as you find that inner peace, write once more. Write, and write some more. Set free all those words that have long been kept within your heart…the happy words, the sad words, words both simple and intricate that a reader will enjoy as he masticates the meaning, the lesson, the joy and young wisdom. Let your words dance…let your words s o a r ! 31 October 2015 Poem of the Day 01 November 2015 Awarded 1st Place - What Would You Say Contest

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Date: 10/7/2018 7:39:00 PM
It seems like your muse had never left your side for this one dear poetess, Well done . Thanks for sharing, and congrats on making the cut . Top 100
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Date: 9/14/2018 10:38:00 AM
Kim: This should be "required reading" for all of us on the soup. Everyone needs a booster shot once in a while. Thanks for sharing with us. oldbuck
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Date: 12/17/2015 4:19:00 AM
lines with curves of wisdom and landscapes of awe! My mind is in a park of joy to how I manage selecting this page. Keep on writing dear poet and as always, a wonderful 7 without a doubt!
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Date: 11/27/2015 5:28:00 PM
All your poetry is number one to me. Love you always my dear friend. Adding this gem to my favorites. armand
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Date: 11/21/2015 6:34:00 PM
Congratulations Kim
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Date: 11/20/2015 11:35:00 PM
Congrats on ur awesome win with this superb poetry dear Kim!
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Date: 11/20/2015 10:57:00 PM
Hi Kim, Congratulations on your wonderful OCTOBER win. I'm inviting you in hopes you enjoy my blog "I am the Pen" wrapping up October and its late winners :( Thank you so much for supporting my contest. Forever & Ever **SKAT**
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Date: 11/20/2015 8:38:00 AM
This is brilliantly written with words of caring. Thank you for sharing such gem that has me thinking... Peace and blessings.
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Date: 11/8/2015 10:00:00 PM
Superb first place win Kim.... big congrats!
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Date: 11/8/2015 7:40:00 AM
I trust that your muse is happy with this great one, Kim. Congratulations.
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Date: 11/8/2015 5:18:00 AM
This is quite an amazing poem, Kim. Surely your muse was on fire while writing this one. Excellent work, as always dear. You write with a lot of feeling and passion, and I just love that! Always, Laura
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Date: 11/7/2015 8:17:00 PM
This winning poem is very expressive and descriptive. Congratulations on your win! Janice
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Date: 11/7/2015 6:58:00 PM
Congratulations in your well deserved win.
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Date: 11/7/2015 5:53:00 PM
Hi Kim, you gave some amazing advice. Congratulations on getting 1st place. Thanks for participating in my contest :-) Alexis P.S. stop by my blog win you get the chance.
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Date: 11/8/2015 9:12:00 AM
Wow. Thanks so much for providing the challenge and inspiration, Alex. hugs!
Date: 11/7/2015 3:36:00 PM
Hi Kim, congrats on your what would you say win. Love SKAT
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Date: 11/5/2015 9:11:00 AM
Kim, it is something that we lose touch with our inner self and what we were. You speak of this with such majesty. It is inspiring to be able to live one's dream when the forces of culture are conspiring to prevent it. Thank-you for giving me this to ponder on this lovely morning.
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Date: 11/5/2015 7:15:00 AM
Well wort reading again! Bravo poet!
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Date: 11/5/2015 6:12:00 AM
Kim this is much need advice. This world is forever trying to conform us to a mundane existence. A friend of mine, asked me what would I miss most upon dying---I would like to say my wife---but what escaped my lips before I could think, was " Writing, being able to write" . This is a 7, good work.
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Date: 11/3/2015 12:24:00 PM
Kim, you have no idea how much this poem resonates with me. I've gone through dark periods where I've turned my back on writing... I regret it immensely. You have captured that feeling perfectly here. A truly wonderful write!
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Date: 11/3/2015 11:48:00 AM
This is absolutely stunning my very dear friend, Kim. I love it so much and I read it twice The last one is aloud:)) This is an excellent poem worth to be read both in silence and aloud my dear friend. Kudos! Again, i love it and to my fave if you don't mind! Thank you so much. God luck in the contest! Thank you so much as well for your congratulatory comments on my featured poem. My hearty Congrats too for this piece as POTD ( I saw comments below) Many hugs to you! <3lots,Leo
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Date: 11/3/2015 11:40:00 AM
Oh, Kim....You are so talented, my dear. This is such a moving and powerful piece. I was touched by the childhood memories you recounted. Life throws many things at us, and it's always good to be able to write and let healing come. :) Lovely ending. Congrats on this POTD beauty.
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Date: 11/3/2015 8:39:00 AM
Kim so beautifully penned. I love it 7 and best of luck in the contest ...
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Date: 11/2/2015 11:57:00 PM
Kim, I reciprocate your poem so much that at times I need to rest my pen awhile and again stare at some distance for inspiration: new ones!! lovely and flows well... Id love to read this aloud..!~Olive Eloisa =`)
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Date: 11/2/2015 6:24:00 PM
Hello Kim... worthy of a speech to inspire and invigorate an audience - thank you Kim - Lindsay
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Date: 11/2/2015 10:27:00 AM
A touching and eloquent description of how easy it is to lose your muse through misplaced ideals and unintentional neglect. Very inspirational! Emile. #7
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