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Divine Intervention Dear Dad…I plucked a crimson rose that lay upon your grave, as icy rain fell down and joined my warm, wet tears that winter day. Unto my heart, I pressed it close to drown my mournful thoughts and feelings deep inside. And then I numbly made my way back home to grieve and heal with loved ones by my side. But soon they left, and I was all alone. That night I placed the crimson rose within a random place inside a book of prose, and it pressed flat for quite some time therein. One day I opened it to find I chose the place that God directed me to lay the rose in answer to my prayers of where you were in death so that my heart could say that everlasting life was yours to share. What I had hoped I know for sure is true... for words within the page where that rose slept, "The Grave," by Robert Blair...bodes life anew; in God’s eternal life our souls are kept. My keepsake rested in a book of prose... God’s intervention was my only guide. Mid secret pages dried your crimson rose... God’s answer to my prayer…with thanks, I cried. September 16, 2014 ~1st Place~ Contest: Avatar Sponsor: Line Gauthier Judged: 12/16/2017

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Date: 12/16/2017 11:38:00 PM
Sandra, this is the first time i have had the pleasure of reading this beautiful poem. congrats on your placement in the contest
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Date: 12/16/2017 5:48:00 PM
Nicely done and inspiring write, Sandra,congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve~`*
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Date: 12/16/2017 6:01:00 AM
Loved this, Sandra, very poignant and heart-felt ... wonderful rhyme and rhythm - congrats on your win, my friend! :-) <3
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Date: 12/16/2017 4:25:00 AM
Full of emotion, congratulations on your well-deserved win! Best forever wishes, Mick
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Date: 12/16/2017 3:39:00 AM
Congrats Sandra for your great win with such an emotion-charged poem.
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Date: 12/15/2017 11:29:00 PM
Thank you so much for your warm touching and masterfully expressed entry. Lovely, Sandra. Congrats on your well deserved win.
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Date: 9/9/2015 4:13:00 PM
Hello Sandra. Your poem is very much worthy of first place and, thanks to being featured on the home page, came to my attention. You write of a sign from God and I am happy to see them everywhere, including your poem. Many people miss the signs but, if you slow down and keep your mind and heart open, you begin to notice them. Glad you were able to share this sign in a poem. Enjoyed this read. :) Janece
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Sandra Haight
Date: 9/9/2015 7:56:00 PM
Hello Janece, thank you so much for stopping by to read my poem. You are so right about believing that signs from God really do happen, and by keeping the mind and heart open, they will come. I have had some others besides the one in poem. Happy to hear you are one of the fortunate ones too. Thank you for your nice comment on my poem. Sandra
Date: 9/8/2015 11:43:00 AM
Sandra, Congratulations on having your poem featured on the home page. **SKAT**
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Date: 9/9/2015 2:32:00 PM
Thank you so much, Skat. I was honored they chose to feature it. Sandra
Date: 8/23/2015 12:29:00 PM
got me teary eyed on this one, Sandra. Congratulations! I miss you! I hope you are keeping well. hugs!
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Date: 8/20/2015 12:46:00 AM
Congrats on ur awesome poem n win Sandra!
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Date: 8/19/2015 10:43:00 AM
It has been a while since I have seen you in one of my contests. Glad to see you back with this excellent poem. Congrats and God Bless.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 8/19/2015 2:43:00 PM
Thank you so much for recognizing my poem with such a nice placement. It means a lot to me because it was about my dear Dad. I hope to be more active than I've been, and look forward to another contest of yours. Thanks again, Sandra
Date: 8/19/2015 1:50:00 AM
Wonderful Win... SKAT
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Sandra Haight
Date: 8/19/2015 2:44:00 PM
Thank you so much, Skat! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 10/4/2014 2:30:00 AM
Sandra, this poem is one of the greatest testaments of Divine Intervention I've ever encountered. Yours tears of gratitude brought immortality to my heart. Such a lovely confirmation of life ongoing in crimson eyes of love. J.A.B.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 10/4/2014 1:11:00 PM
Justin, thank you so much for your kind comments. It was an honor to place in your contest. Sandra
Date: 10/2/2014 10:25:00 AM
I've never pressed a rose Sandra now I am tempted - you have told such a wonderful story I found it very emotional , congrats on your HM hugs Jan xxx
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Sandra Haight
Date: 10/2/2014 11:39:00 AM
Hi Jan, so glad you liked my poem -- how my rose landed in that book of prose was a true story. Flowers press very nicely between sheets of waxed paper inside a book. Thanks for your congratulations! Sandra
Date: 10/2/2014 5:51:00 AM
Nice write on God's intervention, Congrats, Sandra
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Sandra Haight
Date: 10/2/2014 8:47:00 AM
Thank you once again for your comment and congratulations. Sandra

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