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Distant Thunder

rain steals the morning, falling in degrees of gray staining misty sighs with hues of melancholy, drifting with thunder's refrain

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 11/1/2016 6:13:00 AM
short but full of of imagery, joseph... best cheers on your win!..huggs
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Date: 10/31/2016 7:29:00 AM
Lovely Tanka. Congrats on your win, Joseph. ;)
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Date: 10/30/2016 11:21:00 PM
Quite a well written poem, Joseph. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 10/30/2016 9:18:00 PM
Coming back with congrats again. Agnes
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Date: 10/30/2016 9:02:00 PM
Joseph, I enjoyed reading your Tanka. All the best on your winning poem. ~ Sonia
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Date: 9/15/2016 5:47:00 PM
Amazing imagery in so few words, Joseph. Congratulations on your fine 2nd Place podium win. Sandra
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Date: 9/15/2016 4:24:00 PM
Joseph, wonderful tanka...congratulations on your placement :)-luloo
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Date: 9/15/2016 3:38:00 PM
Absolutely lovely Joseph!Congrats!
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Date: 9/15/2016 2:22:00 PM
What a wonderful tanka......perfectly clouded with a melancholy mood! Great work, Joseph...I loved this!
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Date: 9/15/2016 9:06:00 AM
Congratulations, Joseph! ...Fran
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Date: 9/15/2016 7:45:00 AM
Congrats, Joseph. Love the imagery. Agnes
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Date: 4/27/2016 11:24:00 PM
JOSEPH, Congratulations on your "Second Chance #2 WIN." Love LINDA
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Date: 1/13/2016 1:58:00 PM
nicely written
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Date: 1/12/2016 7:56:00 PM
Awesome tanka, Joseph. Best wishes, if for contest. Kim :-)
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Date: 1/13/2016 8:32:00 AM
Thank you so much Kim... hugs

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