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Distant Thoughts

Time has flown by as the flapping of the wings But I will wander singing quietly in the rains, Hope to lay in the boughs of my creator For I will be free from this earthly chains. I have seen the turnings of the seasons Mortal body questing longevity in reasons, Hope to lay in the boughs of my creator Leaving behind those unresolved questions. When I'll be gone, do not hang window curtains For I'll be peeping you from the moon's surface , You'll see me laying in the boughs of my creator In the eternity of love, in the serenity of peace. (for Isiah Zerbst's contest )

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Date: 6/16/2014 7:59:00 PM
thanks for the THANX
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Date: 6/8/2014 8:17:00 PM
KIRAN, Congrats on, Isaiah's "Distant Thought" contest. AWESOME WIN.......LUV* LINDA
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Kiran Bantawa
Date: 6/16/2014 9:29:00 AM
Thanx !
Date: 6/1/2014 11:07:00 AM
Lovely write Kiran worthy of great win ! Huge congrats !
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Kiran Bantawa
Date: 6/2/2014 6:18:00 AM
glad to hear that you liked this, many thanks!
Date: 6/1/2014 9:43:00 AM
Congratulations on a well-deserved win!
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Kiran Bantawa
Date: 6/2/2014 6:17:00 AM
thank you very much!
Date: 6/1/2014 9:04:00 AM
Wonderful write ...Congrats on your win
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Kiran Bantawa
Date: 6/2/2014 6:17:00 AM
glad you liked this, thank you Joseph!
Date: 6/1/2014 2:11:00 AM
Congrats on the win for distant thoughts, Kiran
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Kiran Bantawa
Date: 6/2/2014 6:16:00 AM
thanks Dr Ram
Date: 5/29/2014 3:10:00 PM
uplifting write : )
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Kiran Bantawa
Date: 5/31/2014 11:40:00 PM
Glad you liked it, thanks for stopping by !

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