Distance

DISTANCE Walking towards the light Leaving behind a wink of the night Ignoring the massive things between Exploding with all the things I've seen Reality to dreams, it may be Blinded by the ways of me Without knowing my deception Painting myself with a bad description About me, I have no reason to lie Some things should never be asked why? A sickening motion due to gravity When life decays turn into a cavity Life will soon find a solution Ahead of myself like a resolution Developing the pictures of all time Predicting a way out of a single crime I sit and listen to all incoming observations While my mind is lost in its own rotation Losing myself in a severe way I hate the way I wake up everyday. S.K.A.T.

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Street Poet

Date: 7/5/2016 5:05:00 AM

Very nice dear.. Good expression

Just James

Date: 5/5/2016 4:55:00 AM

Great write!

Diana Bosa

Date: 3/20/2016 3:36:00 PM

It's truly impressive. :-)

Paul Callus

Date: 12/29/2015 7:19:00 AM

There are times when we hate ourselves, even for the most silly things! Morning moods need silence...and a jolly good breakfast:) ~ Wishing you all the very best for 2016 ~ Hugs // paul

Constance La France

Date: 9/3/2015 2:46:00 PM

Skat, a deep powerful write and thanks for my placement of tangerine sky ~~

Robin Davis

Date: 3/2/2014 11:13:00 AM

SKAT Such powerful and deep words. The intensity in your words are right from your heart and it shows. Nice job Thanks once again for the birthday wishes and comment on my poem.

Len Gasun

Date: 11/23/2013 10:48:00 PM

Good am my dearest sis Skat! So glad & an honor for me to visit u today & one of your stellar poems. So glad I found this one. You did an excellent job on this couplets my dearest sis & friend. Perfect and so amazing in every way. I extremely love how honesty is creatively expressed. As a sayng goes, honesty is the best policy. We're just human but we're greatly love esp. by Him. It's in honesty that we're more accepted and loved. Loving & hugging this stellar couplet & U. TYSM! lovem4evrLeo

Zoria Gregory

Date: 7/4/2013 1:04:00 PM

Hi Skat - thank you for the comment on one of my poems. I thought to walk into your world a bit and read many of yours....very nice and I really liked this one! Z

Abdulhafeez Oyewole

Date: 5/8/2013 12:13:00 PM

Very impressive... Good work... You talked about naming a particular poem, on my list. How can we go about it.. Welcome back from the break.. Hope to see your new stuffs ~A.O

Lynette Chachere

Date: 8/20/2010 5:14:00 PM

Thanks Irma, hope your night is an ease.(: and hows life lately.. ~Always&Forever Lynette

Rinki Nandy

Date: 6/29/2010 11:25:00 AM

loved the rhyme and the thought and the idea, isn't there a distance in every emotion, day, relationship which grows with very passing day? thank you for your lovely words on my poem..while you are alive.

Gert W. Knop

Date: 6/3/2010 4:46:00 AM

Hi SKAT, thank you for your ongoing kind comments and have a great day...Gert

Wendy Rader

Date: 5/29/2010 7:41:00 AM

I like the way you focus and the way it flows.

Susan Mills

Date: 5/25/2010 2:23:00 PM

I really liked the rhyme to this poem. Love, Susan

De R

Date: 5/24/2010 11:51:00 AM

Good rhyming and great flow...It conveys a sense of confusion.It's deep and beautiful.

Dillon Yap

Date: 5/24/2010 12:27:00 AM

awesome poem i enjoyed reading it a lot!!! :)

Marie Harrison

Date: 5/22/2010 10:10:00 PM

Smashing poem, we all have those sorts of days. Thank you so much for commenting on my poetry. Haven't figured out how to reply back to peoples comments yet.

Rauwolfia Ra

Date: 5/20/2010 5:03:00 AM

Brilliant poem, I can't describe it in any other way.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/19/2010 5:43:00 PM

Great flow, Irma. I enjoyed. And I think your contest is getting some great results!!! You were brave to do two in a row like you did. I need to get on the ball and do another one too. LUv, andrea

Wilma Neels

Date: 5/19/2010 5:16:00 AM

awesome rhyming Irma, enjoyed it!!- regards Wilma

Arcene Janvier

Date: 5/18/2010 7:28:00 AM

NICE...I LIKE THIS POEM...BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN

Mohammad Hussain

Date: 5/18/2010 7:12:00 AM

NICE RYHMS NICE VERSES NICE ACTS LOVED IT

Gert W. Knop

Date: 5/18/2010 5:42:00 AM

Awesome write, Irma, nice rhymes!..Keep on writing...And thank you for your comments....Gert

Royal Trevino

Date: 5/17/2010 10:05:00 PM

well the rhyming, awesome:), i love it , of course lol, your writes are pretty cool:), clever ending, love Royal<3

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/17/2010 12:59:00 PM

I sit and listen to all incoming observation..while my mind is lost in its own rotation.. OMG BBF Irma this is a magnificent line and the entire poem is awesome .. if I am the "Sweetheart" of P.S. u are definitely the "Darling" sweetie.. good luck and congrats on your first contest .. am leaving tomorrow for two weeks but have submitted an entry ..hope u like.. it was so fun and cool to write.. to support u... enjoy this new feature and will be on my laptop so will be in touch..luv.. to u..