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Dissolute December 1

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Dissolute December 1

Dissolute December

As far as the dissolute December went
And beyond , went the waywardness of minds
And the apostate April at last did  end
The real- time revelries  sometimes feigned.
Letting the reins drop and resting all bother
And clicking away   till the  parting of ways
In the thick of things , with one thing or the other
The reasoning  remained  stupid anyways
Depressed , texted; and  devastated, e-mailed
The status quo still stood so  starkly severed 
Malware still  ruled the failings  soulfully  rued
In the wake of rulings, rash, virus, fresh, brewed.
Booting up senses to download  life once more
Gadgets of  head were restored as never before.

@  23/Sept/2012

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  1. Date: 10/20/2012 5:21:00 AM
    WHOOOT!!! Congratulations champagne is being air flighted over!!! Enjoyed reading Justin's comments below...I second them completely! What a superb entry from u, Jag. :) gwendolen

  1. Date: 10/19/2012 12:57:00 AM
    nice ending- gadgets restored

  1. Date: 10/18/2012 3:35:00 PM
    So much so well done, congrats in Cyndi's contest!

  1. Date: 10/18/2012 11:14:00 AM
    Congrats on your winning work..Sara

  1. Date: 10/18/2012 8:32:00 AM

  1. Date: 10/18/2012 7:56:00 AM
    More dark than the others, but still a good sonnet. Congratulations. Thanks for your kind comments.

  1. Date: 10/18/2012 6:30:00 AM
    Congratulations on your 4th place win in Cyndi's contest Jag. Love, Carol XXXX

  1. Date: 10/15/2012 7:35:00 AM
    December conjures up the seasonal darkness you describe that affects so many of us. Love those last two lines with their thoughtful metaphors that made me smile!

  1. Date: 10/3/2012 12:31:00 PM
    What happens when the God's implore us to be reborn against our inclinations? your work has a positive tendency to ignite wheels of karma and ancient, simple systems of reincarnation my friend - thank you - J.A.B. %

  1. Date: 9/29/2012 4:37:00 PM
    Jag; this is a very good write. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla

  1. Date: 9/25/2012 7:19:00 PM
    Such a complex weaving of emotions in this rhyme...enjoyed the techno-metaphors and the transparent frustration as you sat at your computer keys...a very different sort of write from you...enjoyed! :) gwendolen

  1. Date: 9/23/2012 11:55:00 AM
    An indepth write Jag!Enjoyed this.

  1. Date: 9/23/2012 9:54:00 AM
    great expression Jag..thank you for nice share :) luv SK