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Dishwater Dull

She meekly chased after nonexistent moonbeams in rose fashioned pipe dreamt illusions, as visual stimuli to rock her existence of inky stark impressions, inciting some exertion in her bland universe, she was ever so ordinarily dull even her reflection in the deepest sapphire seas, appeared drab as dishwater, she lived in a world of her own fabricated deceptions. yet, she wondered why every coercive consequence was an analogy hued of washed-out gray releasing shady gasps of Pandora's box

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 10/12/2016 11:12:00 AM
There was a sense of sadness carried throughout as if her life never lived up to her dreams.
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Paloma P
Date: 10/12/2016 11:50:00 AM
I don't think many people live up to their dreamt expectations, but yes, she's a sad creature. Thanks Tim.
Date: 10/12/2016 9:33:00 AM
Dark and deep is the sink this one came from it seems. These suds continue to grow until they overflow within a nightmare of wrinkled skin and worried thoughts. This was crazy good Paloma.
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Paloma P
Date: 10/12/2016 9:38:00 AM
This is actually an old one I was never crazy about, I reworked it, I'm thrilled it took you there, 'wrinkled skin' oh no! :)

Book: Shattered Sighs