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Dirty Wet Diaper

. Dirty wet diaper Sores, scabs, matted hair, crying Lady adopts_mom Contest:"Senryu For Mom" Sponsor:Francine Roberts (My mother said that when she first saw me I had a dirty wet diaper sores, and backed up against her and called her mom.)

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Dr Hitendra Mehta

Date: 5/9/2011 1:27:00 AM

Many congrats Sara for coveted big win in Francine's contest with imagination at its best in this one. Was away hence bit late in wishing/responding. Luv & best wishes - Hitendra Mehta

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 5/8/2011 6:57:00 PM

yup I know that must have done her in for sure! A heart throbber, Sara

George Aul

Date: 5/7/2011 1:25:00 PM

Great write for your win.......George p.s. - I was adopted, too!

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 5/4/2011 2:02:00 PM

Congrats my dear Sara!!!! well written and lovely...

Jack Horne

Date: 5/4/2011 1:41:00 PM

Many congratulations on your win, Sara : )

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/4/2011 12:51:00 PM

Congratulations Sara on your win in Francine's contest "Senryu For Mother". Love, Carol

George Aul

Date: 5/4/2011 12:23:00 PM

Congrats on a well deserved win....George

John Freeman

Date: 5/4/2011 12:07:00 PM

Sara, Great to see you in the winner's circle. Congratulations on your success with this honored presentation. Agape, Moses

Wilma Neels

Date: 5/4/2011 11:57:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in the contest Sara ;)

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/4/2011 10:34:00 AM

Congratulations on the ninth place win in the contest, Sara

Kash Poet

Date: 5/4/2011 4:39:00 AM

Amazing write Sara.Congrats on your win-kashinath

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/3/2011 11:38:00 PM

Hey, I enjoyed reading the story below the poem. Congrats on your win and this was an unusual one that I enjoyed.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/3/2011 11:03:00 PM

i really liked tis the first time i read it, sara.. so emotive... happy cheers for the big win! :) huggs, nette

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/3/2011 9:14:00 PM

Congrats Sara my friend on your special big win in Francine's contest on Mom.. terrific write .. enjoy a wonderful win.. excellent piece..luv..

Tahera Mannan

Date: 5/3/2011 8:57:00 PM

Many warm congrats for this win.

Cory Long

Date: 5/3/2011 6:30:00 PM

congratulations on your win.. cory

Francine Roberts

Date: 5/3/2011 5:47:00 PM

congrats on your 9th place win Sara with this true insight into what a mom is

Cory Long

Date: 5/3/2011 10:03:00 AM

nicely done as always. I have enjoyed it a lot..cory

James Fraser

Date: 5/1/2011 7:23:00 AM

Been there and done it with Diapers Sara. Thank goodness these days are behind me, if you pardon the pun. Have a lovely Sunday....:)

Dixie Fallin

Date: 5/1/2011 12:44:00 AM

You know Francine..sometimes fewer words in a poem speaks volumes!...This is one of those..Good Job!.....SugarbearUSA

Jack Horne

Date: 4/30/2011 7:57:00 AM

What a sweet story of how you found a loving hme, Sara : )

Louis Rams

Date: 4/28/2011 9:55:00 AM

i tip my hat to you for these words have touched my heart too. they mention that you was adopted, and i wondered if you read my poem" adopted" which i think transcends to so many people and society. always the best to you !

Daver Austin

Date: 4/28/2011 7:40:00 AM

Are you adopted? I had to read Carolyn Devonshire's comment to understand the poem. I think that's great - she adopted you, or you adopted her. Whatever. Love, daver

Nette Onclaud

Date: 4/28/2011 4:45:00 AM

ohh, this tugs my heart, sara.. you filled up the page with loving gentleness in just a few words.. i'm sure you love you mom as much as she loves you... amazing with winning wishes to you! :) huggs, nette

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/27/2011 1:04:00 PM

You were lucky to find a loving home, Sara. This tribute to your adoptive mother is beautiful! Children seem to know when they are loved. Best wishes in the contest. Love, Carolyn