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Dirty Mosquito

Form:Balassi Stanza. On a trek to deep jungle, tired I, fell by hay bundle. a giant wild female mosquito, humming my favorite song, crossing all bounds to bang, licked me whole; dirty wild mosquito! kissed my eyes, nose, cheek. not my blood. bloody ,my love it seeks! pheromone pulls this mosquito! my sweat has this filthy stuff extra! my sweat has this filthy stuff extra! Pheromone pulls this mosquito! 28-11-2013. Written for the contest “The Balassi Stanza Contest” by Dr.Ram Mehta.

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Juliet Ligon

Date: 12/22/2013 6:49:00 PM

Seductive take on the mosquito's desire. Clever. Congrats, Poet Undertaker!

Abdulhafeez Oyewole

Date: 12/18/2013 8:28:00 PM

Congratulations P.U!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/18/2013 9:54:00 AM

Congrats on your winning work..Way to go!!!Sara

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 12/15/2013 1:34:00 PM

Wow, scarey! Those pheromones do it every time. lol. congrats. BG

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 12/15/2013 8:24:00 AM

Congratulations Jenish xx

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 12/15/2013 8:09:00 AM

I come from a place filled with Mosquitos. This one made me want to scratch *lol*. Congratulation on your win!

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 12/14/2013 7:52:00 PM

Goodness Jennish LOL [everyone has to be somebodies dinner?] Congrad's on your win. Happy Holidays. Light & Love

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 12/14/2013 7:37:00 PM

Thanks for your interesting poem and congratulations on the win, Jenish

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/30/2013 1:14:00 AM

I enjoyed reading this one tonight!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 11/28/2013 7:56:00 PM

Thanks for the entry, Jenish

Poet. Undertaker
Date: 11/29/2013 7:00:00 AM

Thank you Dr.Mehta. (: ) Jenish.

John Beharry

Date: 11/28/2013 2:19:00 PM

Interesting poem! Good luck in Dr Mehta's contest! I posted a question for you under your blog entitled "Poets - an Institution" re the contest you are offering and am still awaiting an answer. Please respond! Have a nice day!.

Poet. Undertaker
Date: 11/29/2013 6:59:00 AM

John, i have replied there.Good luck in my contest. (: ) Jenish.