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conclusions drawn in crimson they're the hardest to erase as is seeps from every pore pooling on the tile like waste I guess some would call it a bitter aftertaste it shrouds like a hooded cape never quite fading away it's there in all of my dreams remaining here when I wake gnawing like a critter that is trying to satiate is it all illusion? a cruel magicians trick a smoke and mirror side-show the sleight of hand is quick now you see it, then you don't one quick glimpse, before it goes it's a double edged sword that I have fallen upon it is the fickle hand of fate and maybe it could be worse the whole thing has me pondering if I could have changed the course hindsight is 20/20 you don't need glasses to see it is hard to change directions in the middle of what will be

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Date: 5/15/2010 5:22:00 PM
I absolutely love this. Especially that first verse and stanza. Grand write.
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Date: 5/15/2010 4:57:00 PM
I really like the last stanza. Sometimes, it's very hard to change directions. Thanks for sharing.
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Date: 5/15/2010 11:02:00 AM
I WAS REAL DRAWN TO THIS ONE, AND THE LAST TWO LINES WERE SO TRUE, NICE,,Irma
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