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DIP INTO DEEP

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DIP INTO DEEP

we have grown a little older..
by age, by appearance and by maturity..
gone are the days of innocence...
these the days of patience along hindrances..

we look for suitable occupation..
thinking it will enough for our satisfaction..
pleasing each passing incoming generation..
totally aiming for progressive transformation..

all are taking some turns and risks..
hoping and praying these for keeps...
even if it weakens the arms and hips..
vigorously, still one must try the dip...

BY: olive_eloi
aug. 28, 2013
5:25pm

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  1. Date: 10/18/2014 2:29:00 PM
    Patience and hindrances of life, can be strife, but it's the two whom eradicate such - James :)

    Guillermo Avatar Olive Eloisa Guillermo
    Date: 10/19/2014 12:15:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    true!
  1. Date: 8/30/2013 3:13:00 PM
    I like this , enjoyable read Thanks !

    Guillermo Avatar Olive Eloisa Guillermo
    Date: 8/30/2013 3:24:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks for dropping by and reading one of my compositin :) @yvette kelley