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Diminishing Hex-On-Verse

DIMINISHING HEX-ON-VERSE A hex on this verse how could it be worse tongue in cheek or terse potion to reverse a poetic curse quivered arrows wingless sparrows Sphinx and Pharaohs distant gallows funnels bend wordless blend poems end contend pretend words John G. Lawless 1/2/2015 N/S NOT SUBMITTED

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/4/2015 12:45:00 AM

I Love how you rhymed it. Very clever!! this is a weird form and you made me like it.

John Lawless
Date: 1/4/2015 8:28:00 AM

Agreed Andrea, this is one strange little form, thus the tongue in cheek nature of the poem. Thanks for stopping by I know how difficult it is to keep up with comments and reading.

Jan Allison

Date: 1/2/2015 6:37:00 PM

love the play on words in the title and the clever write John:-) Hugs jan xx