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Diminishing Echoes

The lights are dimmed 
On our normalcy
Time is up and
We have to leave
Don't look that way
We both agreed
Trust me
It wont kill you to breathe

No hours left
To conclude our answers
We can't go back
We spent the chances
We MUST lose the meaning 
In our glances
Diminishing echoes
Of silent dances.

Copyright © Jodie Williams

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  1. Date: 10/21/2012 9:40:00 AM
    Very good poem you have here.

  1. Date: 10/13/2012 4:27:00 AM
    Diminishing echoes of silent dances..I love that line,Jodie!:) Great poem,awesome work.Have a great weekend!