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Diet Failure -Foolish Footle

Pants tight Not right Eat less I guess No pie? I sigh Goodbye French fry To gym That’s grim Oh hell Don't tell I ate Whole plate To store Once more I strut Big butt New pants Lets dance!!

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/18/2015 2:15:00 PM

Barbara, Congrats on your FOOTLE POEM win. LINDA

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/11/2015 10:33:00 PM

I think of all the story type footles, this one was my very favorite. BIG congrats, sweetie.

Abdul Malik

Date: 4/8/2015 9:45:00 AM

Hey, this is really good. You should be on the top. Very nice. I like it very much.

Joseph May

Date: 4/8/2015 8:12:00 AM

Congrats on a fine win BG

Eve Roper

Date: 4/7/2015 7:16:00 PM

Congrautlations on your win and a 7. Blessings Eve

Tim Ryerson

Date: 4/7/2015 3:29:00 PM

So you are 'Footler' too I see? I can always count on you for a smile my friend and by the way, in my opinion, gluttony can be a GOOD thing but I prefer calling it 'well nourished' ('Oh hell, don't tell')

Jan Allison

Date: 4/7/2015 11:31:00 AM

dropping back with my congrats:-) hugs jan xx

Constance La France

Date: 4/6/2015 5:53:00 PM

Barbara, you have penned a delightful set of footles for the contest, 7, best of luck in the contest and thanks for visiting my poetry

Viv Wigley

Date: 4/6/2015 1:52:00 AM

The diet starts tomorrow, Barbara. Fun footle! Viv x

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/5/2015 8:49:00 PM

this is fantastic. I wish I had done it this way. I think I will be left off the winners list with my way of doing footles (the original way, not as a story poem).

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/5/2015 8:47:00 PM

guess what, Barbara, my mom's middle name is also jean. but nobody ever called her by her real name. She was named after her dad Albert and she never liked the name Alberta. I can't blame her. haha. now let me see this poem of yours.

Kim Merryman

Date: 4/3/2015 5:38:00 PM

An entertaining group of footles, Barbara! I Can relate. Lol. Best wishes in the contest! Love, Kim

Tim Smith

Date: 4/3/2015 2:58:00 PM

love these BG.....lol

Jan Allison

Date: 4/3/2015 1:33:00 PM

ha ha ha great string of footles:-) hugs Jan xx