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Did You See the Stars

looking up at sky last night stars were all a shining bright moon was glowing its delight what a wonderful beautiful sight. walking riversides lit up swoon birds whistling their dreamy tune trees a blowing in the breeze leaves a falling ground they seize. there upon a bench I sit watching people pass me by couples hands dog leashed to fit winters sign across the sky. wind did blow through waving hair brushing softly tickled face amazed I am to see you there standing strong and tall of grace. twilights music came to mind violins singing dance began angels wings filling with kind moments heavens glad has ran. Dawn Mclaughlin @Dawn2011/12

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Date: 2/1/2012 4:30:00 AM
I like the images in this poem, the bench and all, it's like I'm there with you.
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Date: 2/1/2012 3:40:00 AM
Dawn,yours poem is lovely and sweet,I like it alot. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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