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Did I Give Up To Soon

They told me it's time. You have stopped eating, drinking, and getting up. But you still smiled at me You still held my hand. I could still touch you and you could still touch me. The strength in our bond was still there. Did I let go to soon. I never wanted you to go that way. I guess we can't pick our time. We both let go of our hands it's time to say goodbye.

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Date: 11/24/2015 3:44:00 PM
A sad and deep write. Only you know if you let go to soon, thank you for sharing. SKAT
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