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Diamonds

Diamonds are pretty - They're every girls friend Whether they're thin or meaty Or dress by the latest trend. But also they Might bring disdain, Unhappiness, loss and even pain. They cost quite some money And money's sweet as honey But you may lose it For diamonds - The ones that are your loved one's Friends. So don't take them seriously As it may turn out deliriously And take all your money Away - Just like magic The diamonds, they steal; They also appeal. You have to know That diamonds are low, They're not really worth So much money. They're only like toys For old girls and boys, Who take them too seriously And it turns out so deliriously With all the worthless Money loss. In ages the diamonds Brought mostly disdain Unhappiness, loss and even pain. I may have said it But I must remind - You're human and only One of a kind. So don't waste your life On something so useless When you can be happy And wealthy And live your life nice And be healthy. So please follow My advice If you're not so hollow And feel like an electronic device. Good luck to you, All said above was true For you to read. That's all you nee To know.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 7/10/2016 11:48:00 PM
ALICIA, nicely penned. Enjoyed reading your thoughts and words today. always **SKAT**
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Date: 11/6/2012 4:44:00 PM
Nice reading Alicia I like this poem. Nice Work!
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Date: 11/6/2012 2:34:00 PM
:-) nate
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Date: 11/6/2012 11:14:00 AM
Enjoyed your poem today Alicia..keep writing..regards INK-U-SCRIPT
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Date: 11/6/2012 10:53:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you today Alicia. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/6/2012 10:27:00 AM
An excellent write that I enjoyed reading today Alicia. I hope to have more time in the future to read more. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/6/2012 7:05:00 AM
I liked your poem especially the part about not taking costly diamonds too seriously like grown ladies and men do. Buy her chocolate instead c'mon why not? Personally I love faux pearls and real 14 Karat yellow gold jewelry and these cost way less than Diamonds do. Seeking happiness in expensive luxuries does end up in loss, pain and unhappiness that part is true and well put...
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