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There thrives inside my garden walls a bloom that enchants and enthralls this lovely beauty grows Amidst sweet scents all others pale Designs on love will thus prevail as dew cries on the rose

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 4/22/2016 6:18:00 PM
A beautiful picture and lovely lines about it..I enjoyed reading this one..I like tail-rhymes they are not as easy to write as they seem though..Thanks for the visit to my page and reading my work about my mother's suicide..I appreciate the encouraging comment..Sara
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Lin Lane
Date: 4/22/2016 6:28:00 PM
Well, I thank you very much, Sara. No thanks are needed for visiting your poetry. I enjoy reading them.
Date: 4/22/2016 3:02:00 PM
Beautiful write Lin....A7...
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Date: 4/22/2016 3:07:00 PM
Thank you for such a kind compliment, Joseph.
Date: 4/22/2016 2:48:00 PM
oh lin this is so so beautiful - I especially love the final lines:-) hugs Jan xx 7
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Date: 4/22/2016 3:06:00 PM
Thank you very much, Jan ~ your comment is just as sweet.

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