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D emonic creatures engage to unleash brute force E scaping to attack is their only real course V ile their menacing fangs that gnaw to replete I nflicting extinction with plans to deplete L eaving devastation - blazing hell’s valid source B efore hybrid ogres set free beastly wrath E liminating all life form in their path A ll seems rather grim, with an outcome quite clear S atan’s crony dogs release destruction - fear T ermination completes ultimate bloodbath… Copyright © 2015 By Caryl S. Muzzey Ninth Place Winner ~ "In 5 lines or less # 1 (picture this” Poetry Contest Sponsored by: SKAT A Dec. 27, 2015 10/31/15

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Date: 2/29/2016 9:15:00 AM
A lovely page with mind blowing lines. This is wonderful dear friend. Weldon and thank you for yet another excellent share
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Date: 11/11/2015 2:44:00 PM
An excellent acrostic, Caryl. Pity you exceeded the 5 line limit, for I am sure this would have placed higher! Congratulations on a fine win. // paul
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Caryl Muzzey
Date: 1/9/2016 11:45:00 AM
Thank you Paul for stopping by. I would have commented earlier but have internet problems. I guessing the write wasn't what she was looking for to place higher, cause I did ask if I could write 2, 5 liners. Oh well, it was fun trying anyway... Caryl
Date: 11/8/2015 9:48:00 PM
Congrats on ur awesome winning write Caryl!
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Date: 11/8/2015 10:28:00 AM
I saw them as hounds of hell too!! Congrats on your win.
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Date: 11/8/2015 10:16:00 AM
Hi Caryl: Great Acrostic! Congrats on your win!
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Date: 11/7/2015 6:18:00 PM
Carly, Congratulations on your awesome win. I have a new blog up, "The Only Thing To Fear, Is Fear It'self" stop by and enjoy the winners and my explanation to all who join my contest. Truly enjoyed. Love SKAT
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Date: 11/5/2015 7:04:00 PM
wonderful I love it--Please do check out mines and tell me what you think
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Caryl Muzzey
Date: 11/5/2015 7:22:00 PM
Thank you A. Zaladin, I glad you liked it~ Caryl

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