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I saw a squirrel one day...
industrious was he
as he scampered on his way
with such tenacity !

 I watched him struggle
to stay atop the fence
as he managed to juggle
a slice of bread, quite immense !

Every time he would slip,
he'd climb back to the top,
with the prize still in his grip,
determined not to stop !

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  1. Date: 3/4/2013 5:01:00 PM
    Love your rhymes!!! Excellent pen you have in your possession.