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Determination

Deep down this tricky thick forest, Every tree with fearful leaves, Teaching fruits how to taste bitter, Eager I am to quench all. Roaming bees in search of skins, Muting Joy, playing pains, In it will I sleep and snore, Not now will I give up. Am determined to bind my mind Tossed to and fro by life's swing, Intoxicating fear, Overcoming all. Never! Never will I give up.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 3/5/2016 3:27:00 PM
Oluwatobi,, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 1/7/2016 7:50:00 PM
AWESOME
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Date: 1/6/2016 5:06:00 PM
the poem's fantastic! nice write Tobi, nice write
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Date: 1/3/2016 1:45:00 PM
Awesome bro.... nice piece
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Date: 1/1/2016 11:03:00 PM
So determined.
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