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Determination

Hanging on A thin bending stem A little bumblebee Refuses to fall. Wind blows stronger, Even tighter he clings, Determined not to lose. Tenacity is rewarded As he buries his head Within the crimson heart Of a delicate rose And extracts The sweetest Richest, golden nectar.

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Date: 12/15/2021 2:10:00 PM
Like this one. The bee persists, clings on. And from the crimson heart wins a sweet meal and in return spreads the pollen. A game of give and take. Tony
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