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Detainee

Can you remember who you were before the world told you who to be? reminiscing on elementary, high school, college, was that really me? they say you live and you learn well I don't necessarily agree... because until you see the framework of the system you're still a detainee... we've been manipulated and conditioned to accept bourgeoisie, it starts with our education, or should i say domestication? sit down, shut up, and agree... i hate to break it to you, but it doesn't mean you're smart just because you have a degree... how many of you wanted to work in a cubicle when you were three? whatever happened to artisanship and being crafty? I once heard, dont believe anything you hear and only half of what you see Haven't you ever felt that simply existing is an oddity? Were specks of dust amidst billions of galaxies Were something like a tributary of the singularity Shoutout to Robert Pirsig, I hope this is "quality" Were destroying our environment in exchange for society, destroying our forests and source of oxygen like some sort of black friday spree, starting war in the middle east for oil and the currency, our debts closing in on 18 trillion, is where were headed really that hard to foresee? oh and don't forget about our 120 trillion in unfunded liabilites, This path were on isnt conducive to sustainability, but seriously, I'm just some kid from Oklahoma, feel free to disagree

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Date: 2/24/2017 3:47:00 PM
I to am just a kid from Oklahoma I hear you!
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Date: 4/5/2015 4:27:00 PM
Lets see, your monorhyme suits me, plus your story and its insightfulness-ity. Well written and enjoyed reading. Plus, I agree, mostly.
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