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Destiny and Beyond

A fierce wind howls as dark clouds race across the horizon, and beneath the hood draped over his face the man thinks; of a vast land with wild clear waters, of streaking sunrises and sunsets, and woodlands in a thousand glorious shades of greens. This man from the past has heard her prayers calling him, past time and destiny and beyond her tears have beckoned; his mission to find her and together they will dwell in his ancient world, she has waited for him all her life, never seeing his face. Yet, she loves him with all her heart and soul, this she knows, over mountain peaks and rivers wild, through jungles lush, he has come; now, he stands in the shadows of her room, in the mist of dawn, her long hair in tangles, her skin so pale, it takes his breath away. He steps forward and reaches out a hand to touch her falling tears, and in the moment he fades as if dust in the morning light; a bird sings in the cool air and her room smells of the forests as she rises, a soft touch has awakened her, a lover's caress so gentle. All that day she is haunted with unknown feelings of loneliness, wandering the garden, she silently walks, lost in dreamy thoughts; he watches from the foliage, the hood still covers his face, the time soon, she hesitates, moments pass and he fades in the dappled light. That night candlelight flickers on the walls of her bedroom, it casts shadows in the corners, a soft breeze fills the silence; she sits at her dressing table brushing her hair until it is shining in waves, suddenly a wind catches the long strands and billows them about. He stands behind her watching and slowly he removes his hood, she is not afraid as she stares into the mirror, she has been waiting; waiting for his man, as he twines his fingers in her hair and whispers, taking her by the hand to the bed, they finally kiss. They find her in the morning, she is peaceful and deathly still, her face pale against the white pillow, her lips lush and purple; her eyes closed to this world, she looks asleep perhaps about to rise, dark clouds drift in the sky and thunder rolls in the distance. Raindrops begin to fall as the casket is lowered into the ground, the small gathering bow their heads stepping forward to lay a flower; and although, she had been old, she had been buried in a beautiful gown, of ivory lace and beads, as she had requested in her Will. _________________________________ July 21, 2013 Epic Written by Broken Wings Submitted to the contest, Epic Only, sponsor, Skat Third Place

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Date: 8/4/2015 5:31:00 AM
Congratulations on this excellent winning epic poem, Constance! Beautiful imagery and a great build-up to a captivating climax. I can now look at death with different eyes! Hugs // paul
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Date: 8/4/2015 1:26:00 AM
Congrats on ur awesome winning write BW!
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Date: 8/3/2015 3:48:00 AM
What a beautiful write, this write deserve what is takes, congratulations............A.M.
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Date: 8/3/2015 2:33:00 AM
You are incredible to the naked eye of Death, and immortal in the breath of love! This poem is a 1st Place in my romantic gothic heart my Wings of Fire! A Masterpiece of life and love!!! J.A.B.
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Date: 8/2/2015 11:52:00 PM
Broken, Congratulations, on your win. Thank you for supporting my contest. SKAT
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Date: 7/29/2015 8:55:00 PM
A fantasy novel in the making... Let me know if you write it. I can't wait to read it. rjijr
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Date: 7/28/2015 4:52:00 AM
Hello BW, I think you are the acknowledged master of these epic writes!!Brilliant Work. This is a powerful and riveting write. And the imagery is perfect. I think you may have the winning write here for Skat's contest. Good Luck!! 7 + FAV!! Cheers, Gary
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Date: 7/27/2015 11:08:00 PM
Oh.....you are a master storyteller....how mesmerizing....how hauntingly sad....death can be a welcome visitor.....I believe it is but a sleep. Thanks for your lovely visits and support of late. I'm do grateful. Hugs...
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Date: 7/27/2015 9:44:00 AM
Broken Wings, your title echoes well this verse!!! superbly passionate!~Olive Eloisa =')
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Date: 7/27/2015 2:19:00 AM
I don't know who taught you how to write romance...but that's not the happily ever after I was hoping for, haha. Plot line and joking aside, I love your writing style. This flows so gently along it just sort of carries you as the imagery drifts by. Good luck in the contest, I expect you'll do well. 7+
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Date: 7/27/2015 1:08:00 AM
What a lovely write BW this excellence as always, you never fail to give your lovely write. Good luck................A.M.
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