Destiny

We meet in a crowded room filled with many others Your smile it gives me joy Your arms around me give me comfort I feel like I belong there Your voice exudes happiness Your stories of self make me laugh So much to learn about each other Where will it lead us? Only God knows I believe we are up for the journey Let us follow the path before us May it bring us both happiness in the years ahead We have searched for and hopefully found our destiny

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 5/4/2015 9:01:00 AM

This is so romantic mom. Is there something I should know???

Mama Bear
Date: 5/4/2015 9:07:00 AM

No but if there is you will be the first to know. Have a lot of friends but nothing serious Love Mom

Tim Smith

Date: 5/1/2015 1:51:00 PM

Keep walking towards greener pastures Edith God will show you the way.... Lovely Tim

Mama Bear
Date: 5/1/2015 3:21:00 PM

Lovely comment. God always shows us the way but sometimes we are unhappy with the road He has put us on. Blessings Edith

Hannington Mumo

Date: 5/1/2015 2:18:00 AM

A well-written poem...I like it from the first line to the last one. You may read my poems also...

Mama Bear
Date: 5/1/2015 7:09:00 AM

Thank you for the visit. I will certainly check out what you write. Blessings Edith

Rochelle Harris

Date: 4/30/2015 9:06:00 PM

Mama Bear this is a wonderful write. Young love is oh so beautiful. ...walkin' on sunshine...RH

Mama Bear
Date: 5/1/2015 2:00:00 AM

Thanks for the visit. Any love is wonderful> It is what makes our lives worthwhile Blessings Edith