Destiny

What is this which is called destiny Is it the same as mutiny? We rely too much on fate Lest we lose ourselves In the bogus world Which binds us all To something Known as Life! Contest : Imagination By : Nette Onclaud Date : 7 June 2012

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Chipepo Lwele

Date: 9/26/2012 7:27:00 AM

wonderful .thanx for reading my stuff.

Richard Palmer

Date: 6/12/2012 7:40:00 AM

nice write,wish you luck

Michelle Mac Donald

Date: 6/9/2012 9:32:00 AM

Hmmm..maybe mutiny in the sense that we need courage and perseverance, Anoucheka? "Life" never came with a book of instructions with tips on problem solving. What might feel like a "bogus world" today, might feel brighter and warmer on the morrow.:) So wishing you the best! Mikki

Anoucheka Gangabissoon
Date: 6/9/2012 9:34:00 AM

Well yeah by Mutiny i meant all our problems and the bogus world refers to spirituality.....hmm in the Hinduism philosophies this world is illusory the real world is there where the Lord is!! :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/9/2012 9:21:00 AM

Great thoughts penned..Enjoyed reading this morn..Your imagination is sure to be top of the winners' list..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Anoucheka Gangabissoon
Date: 6/9/2012 9:22:00 AM

Thk you Sara :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/6/2012 4:45:00 PM

A G., this is one fine nonet. i love the conspiracy behind life..xox...pd

Anoucheka Gangabissoon
Date: 6/6/2012 9:43:00 PM

Hey PD....Thks.........how u been??

Funom Makama

Date: 6/6/2012 5:06:00 AM

This is explicitly awesome. I love the piece so much and I think I will be checking on your other wonderful works... Its a blessing coming to your page and I hope you do well to stop by too. Once again, nice work.

Anoucheka Gangabissoon
Date: 6/6/2012 5:15:00 AM

Thk you so much! Writing is a passion! Plz do read more! :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/6/2012 2:11:00 AM

Well written, like it. - Have a lovely day. - oxox Anne-Lise

Anoucheka Gangabissoon
Date: 6/6/2012 5:15:00 AM

Thk you Anne-Lise :)