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Destination Unknown

jet vapours long trail arc across late afternoon sky plane just a speck now

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/22/2011 2:24:00 PM

thankxx Carol .. always luv your warm and welcome comments ... glad u enjoyed my write on the value of poetry luv..

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/16/2011 9:47:00 AM

Thought-provoking, Carol. When we look up and see those jets overhead, we often wonder where they're bound. Really enjoyed the imagery in this haiku. Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/15/2011 6:02:00 PM

Grand imagery and visually energetic Carol.. wonderful words depicting the elements surrounding the plane.. enjoyed and thankxx for your wonderful comment on my Easter contest entry luv..

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 3/15/2011 1:37:00 PM

Nice observation on the jet's flight, Carol

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/15/2011 10:27:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your poetry this today Carol. Have a wonderful week filled with good health, love, and lots of inspiration. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/14/2011 3:29:00 PM

ooh,I LIKE this. VERY nice, Carol!!