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Desperate

She leaves the tap running in the kitchen; she leaves her nine month old baby with the nanny a whole weekend; she can't remember her last date or steamy moments with her husband.... He married her and forgot she doesn't need only roses and Cincinnati wine, but also pleasure for her body. Sometimes she leaves her house half attended, to fulfil another half of her life with a man who saw desire flickering in her eyes...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 7/4/2016 11:37:00 AM
Congratulation my lovely smiling friend on your top placement. Loved always, bl
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 7/5/2016 3:05:00 AM
Thanks so much BL, for your applause!! :-)
Date: 7/3/2016 8:09:00 AM
Excellent, congrats!
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 7/4/2016 6:06:00 AM
Thanks Richard, for your kind applause!! ;-)
Date: 7/3/2016 7:05:00 AM
Nice write. Congrats :)
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 7/4/2016 6:04:00 AM
Thank you so much for your applause, Sunita!!! *^_^*
Date: 7/2/2016 11:48:00 PM
Hi Teddy, Congratulations on your Desperate House Wife WIN. I thank you for writing for my contest. Stop by my latest blog "UNION OF DISGUISING FACES "HZ1" blog #2." if you'd like. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 7/4/2016 6:03:00 AM
You are very much welcome Linda!! ;-) Thank you for your applause, and including my work in your blog!!! *^_^*
Date: 5/31/2016 5:25:00 AM
Well written... The desperation is obvious...
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 5/31/2016 11:19:00 AM
Greetings Probir. Thank you very much for enjoying my piece!! ;-)
Date: 5/30/2016 5:30:00 PM
oh this is so sad Teddy - a loveless marriage - no wonder people stray:-( hugs jan xx
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 5/31/2016 4:16:00 AM
Yes, it's really sad... I tried to show how both parties contribute to the problem, without focusing on one person.

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