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Desire For Distance

December 13, 2014 · our vulnerability Vulnerability Is a deep sea of Beauty. I adore the rawness The complete abandon Of every fear & doubt I melt, i fall My senses falter Eyes gazing full of wonder The innocence The nakedness The allure The silent pull The quickened breath The rush of blood In your presence I am senseless Your eyes on mine So intense The starkness The brilliance That prelude Our vulnerability ... You captivate My soul You awaken my passion And ignite My tigress That sensuality Drunk with the unspoken Desire , dizzy In complete ecstasy Eyes locked Breathless kiss Abandoning fear Giving into every Want..lost in lust And feeling Every touch Lets always be Brave And sweet Completely Naked And silent In our vulnerability.. December 4, 2014 · desire for distance I have a deep desire to live amongst the stars.. Listening to the frequency of every single one... I could get immersed in conversation.. make it a permanent vacation. I could set my gaze upon the moon and whisper every dream I've had in the softness of it's light. I am intrigued with distant far off places. I just want to expand... stretch myself across a foreign land.. i am so attracted to that which i do not know.. i long to touch the ocean and fill my lungs with the breath of the sea... one day, someday, the experience of this distance will define the oneness in my existence.. I am in LOVE with ALL i live from my heart, I See, i feel, i fall

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Date: 9/16/2017 9:38:00 PM
Your poem is nice one of the few poems on here that's coherent. Rate mine please.
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Date: 4/20/2016 7:02:00 AM
Very beautifully penned Stephanie:-) welcome to soup:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/26/2016 10:37:00 PM
Stephanie Knuuttila, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 2/25/2016 9:45:00 AM
Beautiful! Beautiful! Beautiful! Welcome to Poetry soup. Hoping to read more of your excellent writes
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Date: 2/25/2016 6:36:00 AM
Stephanie,, Welcome to Poetry soup I hope you enjoy the community. You'll find friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Other than that I will read, enjoy and comment with positive feedback. Remember, keep posting, stay in touch, TAP my shoulder when you have a new poem. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. You might find my support addictive. I've been a SOUP Poet for 6 years. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. I'm from Texas, How about you? Tell me a little about your poetic skills. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 2/25/2016 7:07:00 AM
Hi, Stephanie, you will find the format. The tricky part about this site is to navigate and add photos. If you ever need help in that department, I'd be more happy to help. Ps..thanks for the reply and visit. Linda
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Stephanie Knuuttila
Date: 2/25/2016 6:49:00 AM
Thank you! I can already see i have made an error in posting this. Lol i will figure it out. I am from Utah but i now live in Finland. I've been writing poetry since i was 5 years old! But for the last year i have been a bit blocked! A friend of mine from Facebook sent me a link for this site! I will fix my poem from my laptop as the mobile phone isnt ideal for this! Thank you and i will read your poems also! Nice to meet you Linda :)
Date: 2/25/2016 6:36:00 AM
- A beautiful poem, Stephanie - I welcome you to PoetrySoup - Most of all, have fun :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Stephanie Knuuttila
Date: 2/25/2016 6:50:00 AM
Thank you Anne Lise you have a beautiful name i am excited to read some of your poems !??

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