Desire

Alluring breasts caressed devilishly. Ethereal fantasies, growing hard in just kissed lips. Moist new odors penetrate quivering recurring spasms. Teasing, undulating, viscous wetness; xanthic yearning zealots. 09/27/15

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Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 10/8/2015 2:13:00 AM

Wonderful write James! Congrats on superb win!

Skat A

Date: 10/4/2015 6:51:00 PM

James, Congrats on your beautiful win. Love SKAT

James Inman
Date: 10/4/2015 6:57:00 PM

Thanks SKAT

Balveen Cheema

Date: 10/3/2015 11:57:00 PM

An etheral win James! Congrats!

James Inman
Date: 10/4/2015 12:05:00 AM

Thank you, Balveen.

Mark Woods

Date: 10/3/2015 8:38:00 PM

Spicy! Congratulations on your win. Well done

James Inman
Date: 10/4/2015 12:09:00 AM

Thanks Mark.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/3/2015 7:21:00 PM

glad to see you entered it, Ralph. We both placed the same. Wheeeee! congrats.

James Inman
Date: 10/3/2015 8:27:00 PM

Thanks Andrea and the same to you.

Eve Roper

Date: 10/3/2015 5:08:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve

James Inman
Date: 10/3/2015 5:21:00 PM

Thanks Eve.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 10/3/2015 4:42:00 PM

Congratulations on your wonderful win with this sizzling entry James!

James Inman
Date: 10/3/2015 5:21:00 PM

Connie, thank you.

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 10/3/2015 4:27:00 PM

andrea knows me well - i did indeed like this one!! someone turned the heat up, going boldly where no one else dared to go...it was certainly the most explicit and erotic one, and i loved it up until the very last line when i felt that 'xanthic' didn't quite fit, but it's so difficult with those tricky last letters; with a slightly different last line it would've placed higher for sure; grieved that i couldn't give it a higher placement, but congrats on your win anyway!

James Inman
Date: 10/3/2015 5:18:00 PM

Thank you, Charlotte. I looked at that word so many times and kept trying to find something I liked better. Sizzling contest!

Jan Allison

Date: 10/3/2015 2:15:00 PM

Dropping back with my congratulations James :-) hugs Jan xx

James Inman
Date: 10/3/2015 2:40:00 PM

Thanks Jan

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/27/2015 5:09:00 PM

hey, you did AWESOME. why not enter it?? I know Charlotte, and this one is RIGHT up her alley!! (oh good grief, the captcha says HRD. hahahaha)

James Inman
Date: 9/27/2015 6:16:00 PM

I entered a little while ago. I think it was the last one. Thanks Andrea.

Jan Allison

Date: 9/27/2015 1:39:00 PM

mine looks tame in comparison James lol good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx

James Inman
Date: 9/27/2015 3:10:00 PM

Thanks Jan, actually wrote it a couple of weeks ago and intended to tone it down a bit but after reading a couple of other ones. I left it the way it was.