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Deserted

Deserted She watches from across a darkened street And pain congeals behind her tawny eyes She sees the one that he has come to meet But none will see the silent tears she cries Her heart belongs to him no matter what She dreams he will return to her one day Inside she knows her dreams will come to naught For when she smiles he turns his face away So many times she’s lingered here in vain Her heart though tired and weary cannot rest The crumbs he throws, she treasures, counts as gain the hurt he deals she takes without protest This man, whom she has loved all of her life Will never now embrace her as a wife ~~~ For Olusequn’s contest ‘Betrayal’ 18th January 2010

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Date: 4/26/2012 2:23:00 PM
"The crumbs he throws, she treasures, counts as gain." Great line. Talk about vulnerable. Congrats on the selection. daver
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Date: 4/26/2012 8:24:00 AM
Congratulations on your featured poem!
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Date: 4/24/2012 7:05:00 PM
Congrats Margaret on"Deserted" being featured.
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Date: 4/24/2012 6:12:00 PM
Feelings deep... very nice, ver nice! Terry
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Date: 2/11/2010 7:25:00 AM
this is a good poem and i wish you good luck in the betrayal contest, this write was heartfelt and emotional, you should do well. =) jo
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Date: 1/21/2010 6:57:00 AM
Margaret, you did really well with this one. It's a traditional lovely sonnet. Great meter. Great message. I think you should do great in the contest! Luv, Andrea ps thanks for explaining your other poem further. I DID get the gist of it then!!
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Date: 1/19/2010 12:04:00 AM
Margaret, This sonnet is touching and is definitely a betrayal. Love given and not fully returned is a difficult love to live. It hurts. Only in moving on does some degree of peace come. And then... the best thing happens. Reciprocal true love. And a life full of joy. God be with you. Lovingly, Dane Ann
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Date: 1/18/2010 10:28:00 AM
Thank you for sharing a piece of your heart with us today in your poetry Margaret. Wishing you a wonderful week full of inspiration. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/17/2010 10:38:00 PM
Good luck on the contest. many have gone through that in life and it pains you know. i can just feel the pain as i read these poem....
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