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Desert Becomes Water

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Sometimes our lives or writing is like a desert then again it is like a plush stream...

. Desert powdery waterless withering drying unrefreshing aridness thirst rain spring living bubbling refreshing deep well water

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Joe Maverick

Date: 12/2/2011 9:43:00 AM

Well Sara, this reminds me that there can be sustenance in the most unlikley situations..! worth thinking on yours Joe:)

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 12/1/2011 10:58:00 AM

I like the way this goes from dry to wet Sara. I looked at the form and then decided it was to much thinking at the moment. Ryan has his nose surgery today so did not sleep last night. He is a heavy smoker and also asthmatic and tons of allergies. love phyl

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 11/29/2011 8:35:00 PM

made me thirsty!! how are you lately? hope you are good. could you pick caleb up at school at 3pm on Thursday?

Journey Mcknight

Date: 11/29/2011 9:57:00 AM

very well descriptive , I like it alot. well put together, how much time did it take ya? Missed reading you so I dropped by. Cindy (Lifes a journey....)

Richard Pickett

Date: 11/29/2011 9:28:00 AM

Nice Sara, well done. God Bless...Taz

Daver Austin

Date: 11/28/2011 3:07:00 PM

Interesting use of this form, Sara. A true oasis of a poem. Love, daver

Jack Horne

Date: 11/28/2011 9:11:00 AM

Lovely diamante, my friend. I loved the vivid descriptions you used

Nathan D.

Date: 11/27/2011 11:03:00 PM

love it Sara'

Russell Sivey

Date: 11/27/2011 9:45:00 PM

Very nice Diamante, I thought it to be very effective in conveying just what you wanted to say! Starts off perfectly heading towards that coveted water and finally sees this water! It got what it wanted! Great work!!

Bl Devnath

Date: 11/27/2011 8:51:00 PM

Beautiful write of comparison. Best of luck for contest. bl

Kim Merryman

Date: 11/27/2011 3:24:00 PM

Nice contrast, Sara. Best wishes in the contest. Kim