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My eyes are wide open But I have no mercy left to give You'll be alone on your own Learn to swim if you want to live I won't preach another sermon You never listened to me I'm not the one who's confused You're killing yourself. Why can't you see? Curse me, curse me It's what you always do Put the blame on me You don't have a clue it's you I offered you my hand Mercy and love I gave But you refused and fell again You deceive yourself; a fool I can't save Go ahead, feast on your poison Feast until it kills your soul If it's death you are seeking I won't watch you descend into that hole Curse me, curse me It's what you always do Put the blame on me You don't have a clue it's you Let it course through your veins Let it fill your mind with its kiss You're drowning in a whirlpool It's pulling you down into the abyss I won't waste my time cursing you You've sunk as low as you can Keep asking for mercy until you die I hope you make it, you foolish man I should curse myself For holding on so long Holding on to the man you used to be You turned your back on me. That was wrong Curse me, curse me Swear at me once more before I go I won't hear you when I'm gone You're just someone I used to know ::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::: May 3rd, 2016 Rob Carmack's Lyrics II Contest Based on "Descending" by The Black Crowes

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Date: 6/16/2016 6:13:00 AM
Nicely done Lin. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 6/11/2016 6:02:00 PM
This is a dark one but very well expressed. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 6/11/2016 1:52:00 PM
It is not easy when you have to say goodbye to someone you really love and a lot of people can not do it. I am glad you were strong enough to pull the trigger.
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Date: 5/4/2016 6:57:00 AM
Pretty brutal stuff, well written g/l in the contest...
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Date: 5/4/2016 7:10:00 AM
That kind of life is brutal in more ways than one. Thanks, Charlie.
Date: 5/4/2016 4:23:00 AM
Wow Lin so powerfully penned!!! I can relate to so much of your words especially the final stanza which hits home hard i must listen to the track and see if I too can get inspired :-) hugs Jan 7 and faves
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Date: 5/4/2016 7:09:00 AM
Living with someone you love who has an addiction is a tragedy in slow motion. You can only help them if they want help. Taking the abuse, verbally and/or physically, draws you into that whirlpool. The lyrics of the song says, 'it's either sink or swim.' I swam. Thank you for your comments, Jan, and I'm sorry you related to it.
Date: 5/4/2016 2:49:00 AM
Excellent. Lovely portrait poem write. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.
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Date: 5/4/2016 7:05:00 AM
Thank you, Ravi.
Date: 5/4/2016 1:20:00 AM
What a descriptive entry for the contest. You bexp ct this to do very well!
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Lin Lane
Date: 5/4/2016 7:04:00 AM
Thank you, Rick. I wasn't familiar with the song, but when I heard it I relived a part of my life that was a parallel nightmare.

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