Depths of Love

Love is a challenge At best of times But if our hearts be true Love like water will find Its true depths in you. ©? Brenda V Northeast 14th January 2012

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Maureen Lefanue

Date: 1/22/2012 3:37:00 PM

Dear Bren, Thanks for yet another of your gracious comments. We have the March flies up here in Noosa, and they have a horse bite even worse than mozzies. Aeroguard to your rescue! Have a great day! God bless you, love, Maureen

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/17/2012 7:54:00 PM

wow, this is DEEP just as the title suggests!! with a few tweaks it could be a tanka poem!

Brenda Victoria Northeast
Date: 1/18/2012 3:52:00 AM

Thank you Andrea- I am not sure how to do Tanka's any suggestions? : ) Love and blessings, Brenda

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 1/15/2012 8:26:00 AM

Each line delivers an interesting thought which winds up so beautifully in the last line. Very special Brenda!

Brenda Victoria Northeast
Date: 1/15/2012 8:40:00 AM

Thank you Elizabeth, kind regards, : )

James Marshall Goff

Date: 1/14/2012 11:34:00 PM

Splendid! Brenda! jimbo

Brenda Victoria Northeast
Date: 1/15/2012 1:01:00 AM

Thank you Jimbo you have blessed me again, : )

Vertical Vertical

Date: 1/14/2012 9:55:00 PM

Beautiful! I like to read again and again the last two lines.Very Beautiful.

Brenda Victoria Northeast
Date: 1/15/2012 1:01:00 AM

Thank you so much Vertical, I appreciate your visit and kind words, brenda : )

Suzanne C. Goudreau

Date: 1/14/2012 7:22:00 PM

Wow! I've read this one a few times as each time a different meaning came to mind. Very cleverly delivered. Love your penning. This poem delivers a profound message in just a few lines. Excellent read!

Brenda Victoria Northeast
Date: 1/15/2012 1:00:00 AM

Thank you Suzanne : ) Blessings and love, Brenda