Depression

Falling farther from faith, failing Diving, down deep Faithfully fighting, finally Listening, living, lying Some souls sleep somberly,... sinking

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/27/2015 1:14:00 PM

anytime.. :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/27/2015 1:03:00 PM

Hi Jacob, Alliteration's on of my favorite forms. I try adding a little alliteration throughout my writes. At times, it gives it a better flow. Just like this poem here... Depression kills the soul. No matter how many breaths we take, depression is a sentence we give ourselves once we fall deep into it. Enjoyed... LINDA

Jacob Frey
Date: 8/27/2015 1:06:00 PM

True words Linda kill the soul, it does. Once again, I appreciate the comment and the kind words.